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Just Cat's avatar

Oh god, this is taking me back to my summer of revisions last year! It's hard work, and I love to read people reflect on their writing process, it's super interesting. I think making Senna a foil to Lucile is a good idea, but since I must keep this comment spoiler free we can discuss this on dms if you want :p

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Grace Varley's avatar

hahahaha avoiding those spoilers like neo from the matrix!!! it's definitely hard, and i'm struggling to make this what i want it to be right now. i'm actually, after some introspection, completely re-plotting and re-writing act two for senna (and adding some more lucile stuff, i think); totally different story, going to a new place, meeting different people, lots more character arc stuff. i think it's better, but OOF IS IT A LOT

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Just Cat's avatar

wow thats a lot of work! i am really excited to see where the story goes !

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kamilah cole's avatar

LJKNHKLJHNJKLHNJKLHJKLHNJLKH this mention of my book i want to CRY

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Grace Varley's avatar

IT'S THE BEST BOOK EVER!!!!!

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Brittany M. Willows's avatar

I recognize I'm very late to this (very interesting post overall by the way!! love reading about others' processes) but OH MY GOD THAT ARTWORK

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Grace Varley's avatar

LMAO UR GOOD!!!! hehehe i genuinely love it so much!!!

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